I tried to be good
at ad-libbing
even in the middle of a tornado
ripping the seams of our house
while we slept;
I figured we would get by
on rations
But when you told me no
it gave me a new resolve
and all the denials
did not lay me outright
like before
lying flat like a lizard, drinking
from a puddle of my fears
and your disappointment
Are we a mystery or a thriller?
because much of what makes us
we
is simple to understand
regardless
of the storm coming.
Are we not thrilled?
Falling in love was easy
once we got inside–
getting out
takes more work
(it is easier) than we (to stay)
than we Ā imagined
doubt oozing
from around the windows
suspicion coating the walls
trying to read the future
in the dishwater–
always murky
Damn! That was good!
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Thanks!
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Realism with excellent imagery
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Thank you. Your comments are encourageing
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Your images based on life experience produce poetry that is in a class by itself. So are you.
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You’re gonna make me cry…thank you
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The use of symbolism is stunning. In fact, they explode in the readerās face with a force, the lizard siping from the puddle of fear and disappointment, the mundanity of three-leaved clovers, the future in the dregs of the dishwasher.
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Thank you–I really wanted them to explode like that, so your words are encouraging
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Your writing is so intense, powerful–WOWWWWWW.
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A beautiful, torrid poem lady x
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