night likes
the feel of flowers
my book is done
read on, read on
annihilate my cave
like any woman
everything open
knees. eyes, lips.
a dying art

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      1. More by accident than intention, LOL! I can see the different parts in what you wrote, but they work so effectively together. The whole thing moves and drives line by line through to the end. Bravo for having the instincts to find this.

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      2. You should follow @VERstype on Twitter. If you want to follow me, I am @areyouthrilled there. He announces it once a month, usually the last week of the month, and it runs on the site for about 5 days.

        At Verstype, you put your poem in the comments section of that months selection. Your entire poem (including title) are taken from the source material, but the guidelines are there in the menu if you want to look them over ^_^

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